January 13th, 2014, 07:32 AM
Need help with this text
I don't speak very good English. I was wondering if anyone could fix any grammar issues in this.
January 13th, 2014, 02:13 PM
- Don't refer to your thing as a website. Just call it by name - "Sydney F".
- Do you really want these advertisers to start spamming users? Sounds like a bad idea...
- "Personal" emails are a bit dated. You're dealing primarily with businesses so be more professional.
- I assume this is a confirmation email? You should include details about the ad being placed.
And lastly, this looks like it will be a text-only email. Make it an HTML email with graphics (not too many, and remember they're often hidden on the first viewing), in which case the email should not read like a letter (it shouldn't anyway) and more like the kind of confirmation message you get when booking hotels or buying stuff online.
January 29th, 2014, 05:23 AM
I don't find any mistakes in your grammar! Everything is alright
October 7th, 2014, 07:08 PM
It's fine, i cant see any error with it.