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Old June 9th, 2005, 03:29 PM
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another what do u think?

please emphasise on the layout NOT on if the code is wrong etc, just wanna see how it looks:


http://stuweb.cms.gre.ac.uk/~as234/925/

http://stuweb.cms.gre.ac.uk/~as234/design9/design9.htm

also suggest some modifications if they will help!

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Old June 9th, 2005, 03:32 PM
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neither of those links could be found...

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Both the links are not working.

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It's really hard for me to give you an accurate critique with so little material--not even lorem ipsum, for Pete's sake! What I can tell you that I like the second one better, although the image is a bit too blocky. In the first, either the code is buggy or the layout is wacky.

None of the links work, and the page is very white. I can see that it's a jewlery site, so I suppose that's okay, but might you add some detail? Even a hint of grey could go a long way.

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