Website Critiques
 
Forums: » Register « |  User CP |  Games |  Calendar |  Members |  FAQs |  Sitemap |  Support | 
User Name:
Password:
Remember me
Go Back   Dev Shed ForumsWeb DesignWebsite Critiques

Reply
Add This Thread To:
  Del.icio.us   Digg   Google   Spurl   Blink   Furl   Simpy   Y! MyWeb 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread Display Modes
 
Unread Dev Shed Forums Sponsor:
  #1  
Old February 16th, 2004, 01:16 PM
pyromancer pyromancer is offline
Registered User
Dev Shed Newbie (0 - 499 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Posts: 5 pyromancer User rank is Just a Lowly Private (1 - 20 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: < 1 sec
Reputation Power: 0
Anyone willing...

Would anyone be able to rate my website for me please (http://www.harrymills.co.uk). If you do can you please rate it under the following categories:
>Code
>Looks
>Content
>Accessibility

Thanks

Pyromancer

Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old February 18th, 2004, 02:44 AM
jabba_29's Avatar
jabba_29 jabba_29 is offline
Back in HEL
Dev Shed God 8th Plane (8500 - 8999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Finland
Posts: 8,667 jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)  Folding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner FolderFolding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner FolderFolding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner Folder
Time spent in forums: 3 Months 3 Weeks 4 Days 5 h 1 m 49 sec
Reputation Power: 1618
Send a message via ICQ to jabba_29 Send a message via AIM to jabba_29 Send a message via MSN to jabba_29 Send a message via Yahoo to jabba_29 Send a message via Google Talk to jabba_29 Send a message via Skype to jabba_29
Facebook
Code -> html validate, so thumbs up -> though gallery script doesn't work in Firebird (Mozilla)
Looks -> OK if you like green, bit bland generally
Content -> Apart from the blog (not my thing), just seems to be a collection of links.
Accessibility -> 508 OK, needs repair with full priority checking according to Bobby http://bobby.watchfire.com/bobby/bo...lth=Bobby%2F3.3

Overall, not too shabby
__________________
Cheers,

Jamie


# skiFFie | Home of the 'accessibility module' for Drupal
# Jamie Burns [me] Accessibility Module [drupal]
# guidelines | search | wap resources | not getting help | fold to cure

# Any form of employment is strictly prohibited ......


__________________

Let the might of your compassion arise to bring a quick end
to the flowing stream of the blood and tears .....
Please hear my anguished words of truth.

__________________

Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old February 18th, 2004, 05:51 AM
Akh's Avatar
Akh Akh is offline
|<.+#f@#+.&.|
Dev Shed Frequenter (2500 - 2999 posts)
 
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: norway
Posts: 2,622 Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level)Akh User rank is Colonel (50000 - 60000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 3 Weeks 6 Days 2 h 18 m 25 sec
Reputation Power: 548
when using xhtml1.1 you should serve the page as application/xhtml+xml, yours is served as text/html,
you have to set this serverside, it doesn't help with the meta-tag.
http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml-media-types/
http://www.greytower.net/en/archive...tmlcontent.html

you have a bit illogical order of headings,

it would be better if you had
the topbanner as h1, then the headers in navigation as h2, and the first p in maincontet also as a h2, then use css to controll the look

just an example,
<div id="topbanner"><h1>Welcome to harrymills.co.uk</h1></div>
<div id="leftcontent">
<h2>Navigation Links</h2>
[..]
<div id="maincontent">
<h2>On this site I aim to provide:</h2>

http://www.webaim.org/techniques/structure/

in lower screen resolution the elements overlap each other,
one of the problem with position:absolute, and a set height.
would be better if the only navigation was positoned, then use margin-left on the other two elements,

something like this. (not tested)

div#topbanner {
margin-left: 22%;
width: 75%;
padding: 1%;
border: thin dashed #009900;
background-color: #006600;
font-size: 1.8em;
font-family: Verdana, Tahoma, Arial;
font-weight: bold;
color: #ffffff;
text-align: center;
}

div#maincontent {
margin-left: 22%;
width: 75%;
min-height: 80%;
padding: 1%;
border: thin solid #009900;
background-color: #003300;
font-size: 0.8em;
color: #FFFFFF;
}

and remember to set a background color to the body,
if you want a white background then set one, not everyone have white as default background color.

otherwise a clean and simple design,

Reply With Quote
Reply

Viewing: Dev Shed ForumsWeb DesignWebsite Critiques > Anyone willing...


Thread Tools  Search this Thread 
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes  Rate This Thread 
Rate This Thread:


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
View Your Warnings | New Posts | Latest News | Latest Threads | Shoutbox
Forum Jump


Forums: » Register « |  User CP |  Games |  Calendar |  Members |  FAQs |  Sitemap |  Support | 
  
 





© 2003-2008 by Developer Shed. All rights reserved. DS Cluster 3 hosted by Hostway