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Old February 28th, 2009, 09:21 AM
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B-Mobile logo / splash page

can some one critic my logo and give ideas to improve it. i am open to changing the logo on a better idea.

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Old March 5th, 2009, 08:11 AM
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it looks good althought it takes an absolute life time to load yoursite. I guess its over in india?
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Old March 6th, 2009, 07:29 AM
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hmmm, wouldn't even load for me. Even from India it shouldn't take long to load your site.
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Its simple and clean - like it

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Old April 5th, 2009, 06:53 AM
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You have to think about consistency, you've written the name in three ways, bmobile, b-mobile and "b mobile". Not good branding.
The logo it self looks a bit bland and generic, not much more to review.
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very nice website...

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I must confess that I love your logo! It's simple, and to the point. Moreover, I'm sure it will look great in black and white - well done!

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I agree with Akh, the logo works simply as b mobile (and it looks good), the domain name is suitable to go with that, but your title is -mobile. I'd change the title if I was you.

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Simple, I like. Takes a while to load though for some reason.
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