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Old August 1st, 2010, 06:49 PM
CoolAsCarlito CoolAsCarlito is offline
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Okay so I posted this and have down quite a few things to the site including actual content and many other things I just need a few more ideas on how it looks and what people think I should do with it.

http://kansasoutlawwrestling.com/

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http://kansasoutlawwrestling.com/eventarchives

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Old August 12th, 2010, 11:34 PM
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Lol that's a pretty intense design. Maybe try to style the phpbb forum a little more consistently with the rest of your site.

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Old August 13th, 2010, 10:59 AM
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SEO - there needs to be more text on the main page for the search engines to figure out what your site is about.

Links - some things look like they are going to be links, like everything in red seems to me that they would be links. Because some things in red are and some aren't.

I don't think you need a welcome to the people coming to your site. One, I don't need to be welcomed. Two, this is supposed to be an intense, let's go crazy wrestling website, make it like that. You don't want to be nice to the people. Unless, you do something like "Welcome to the Blood-Bath" or "Are you ready to get crushed?"

I know you are just using images for placeholders until you get the real images in there, but make sure not to stretch images.

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Old November 11th, 2010, 04:36 PM
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One thing I'd say about the welcome page is that the text is very crowded. Give it some line-height space and margin to push out the sidebars a bit.

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Old January 20th, 2011, 07:38 AM
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You're getting error messages on your home page.

Interaction with the main menu items. Maybe a glow or color change.

Otherwise, good looking site, despite the fact that you've been working on it for at least six months...

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Old January 22nd, 2011, 12:47 AM
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just check it and see that there's some error code on your site, i think you were working on it and i think this style is so awesome to adult attraction

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looks pretty cool.

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