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Old May 2nd, 2005, 02:16 AM
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I'd work on filling the rows of bird houses on your index with more information or graphics. They seem abundantly empty at the moment with just a small thumbnail and two lines of text. Also, maybe add a 1 pixel border around the thumbnail to sharpen it up a bit.

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The site is too direct! The first thing I see when the homepage opens is sponsored links....not good. You should use the homepage as an intro before diving right into your catalog.

The google advertisements (which appear before your own content) provide links to other companies selling the same products, this cannot be good for business.

Good to see you have used some CSS. I would recommend an external stylesheet though as opposed to all those inline style rules.

Nice Banner.....

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