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Old December 31st, 2003, 08:56 PM
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Hey everyone,

I'm new to this forum and wanted to show you the first website I made.

I'm studying computerscience - major networking, but we just had a webdesignclass too, and had to hand in a website as an assignment.

www.andymonsterproductions.com

Don't hold back on the critiques pls, I'm here to learn

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Nice.

Only critisism is that the pop ups from the balck and grey page aren't quite large enough in Firebird - the close window link is almost off the page.

Also, You have a pop-up on the first page - don't know what it is , hopefuly not important 'cos I use pop-up blockers

I would alos run your site through a validator, http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=h...nline&verbose=1
, otherwise looks nice - good luck!
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Very nice page. I like the clean and to-the-point layout. The only suggestion I'd have is to add links to Home, Bio, and Custom Work from the main page. The only way I saw to get to that content, was by first clicking on one of the art categories.

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tx for the suggestions. I was thinking bout it too, making the navigation a bit better. But I was on a strict timeschedual here. I'm also thinking bout easier navigation from color to black etc .. now its kinda a pain to go back all the time.
The pop-up was just something we had to make in flash to prove we could do it, the thing is getting off there as soon as I got my marks. Popups are the most annoying thing ever, long live pop-up killers ;-)

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