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Old October 25th, 2004, 07:22 AM
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er...frames are a bad idea! I dont know if you used them for a specific reason, but they cuase alot of problems!..i'd scrap them and use <divs> or just tables.

Also, I found that the site doesnt render properly in firefox because your code isnt compliant, I would run it throught eh w3c validator (just typr html validator in google)

I would change the font to arial(personal preference, i just think it looks professional) and the text size in the nav, when you click a section is too small.

Also, in the main frame, there is waaaayyyy toooo much content. I wouldnt even think twice about finding somthing in there.

I quite like the font in the title. Maybe incorporate the brown into the text and links on a white background...it mite bring the site together more.

even though, simple is good..i would think about adding some images to give it a bit of ooo...

dunno if you think these are valid comment, but there ya go

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Old October 25th, 2004, 08:03 AM
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er...frames are a bad idea! I dont know if you used them for a specific reason, but they cuase alot of problems!..i'd scrap them and use <divs> or just tables.
Don't use framesets or tables they both cause problems.

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Also, I found that the site doesnt render properly in firefox because your code isnt compliant, I would run it throught eh w3c validator (just typr html validator in google)
or click to http://validator.w3.org.

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thanks for the validator and link

the validator is great. Didn't know about it.

http://validator.w3.org.

I used Frames to quicken the refresh of the bottons area, thus the whole page wasn't refreshing. Also once, when you choose a store to see their coupons/offers it only refreshes the main frame for speed.

??? if I don't use table or frames, what do you recommend ?

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Use CSS for layout and SSI for Putting in bits of pages.

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