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FreeStyle Design (need CRIT)
OK I know geocities is crap and it throws up javascript errors !!!
BUT Apart from that I need some feedback on my site (both positive and negative) http://www.geocities.com/jezman2002/index.html THANKS GUYS !!! |
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Well I can tell that you know how to create images, and images have their place within web pages, but not as the basis of a page. Pages that are mostly images often look nice but do not retain visitors. I think that you need alot more content, and also need to have less links. Only use links to where you have at least a full page of content. If you need to, consolidate two areas into one, or just show alot more examples. Finally, remove the welcome to my site on the home page, sounds like your first site.
Hope I didn't offend, just trying to inspire improvements. My site: http://open-a-business.com/index.html |
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Layout is good. May be you could make the blue bgcolor a little lighter.
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Thanks I was also thinking that Techie !! Kinda purpley at the minute do you suggest any hex dec colours ?
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looks really impressive,
I just think that after I had a look at your formerly projects, which are impressive as well, I was surprised to see that you are using geocities. that does not look professional in my opinion |
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Why not try this and see how it looks..
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bgcolor="#787890" |
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