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Old April 14th, 2004, 06:44 AM
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Hello all,
I have recently created this site and was wondering what
other people on here thought of it. The main viewers for the
site think that its great, but they are people that (to be
frank) do not know much if anything about webdesign.
Please tell me what you think.
Thanks

Site URL: http://wiganyac.hellrazer.net/

also:
The way I have multiple pages is I have an index.php file
and then use the php function include() to incorporate the
other pages into the main design where needed.
Are there better ways of having multiple pages?
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Old April 14th, 2004, 08:37 AM
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The site isn't that bad, although you need to integrate the Guestbook and Photos section with the site. And I would suggest making a different header. The current one is kind of pixelated, and the text logo on it doesn't really stand out. I would also suggest moving the quick login box located at the bottom of the page somewhere else, like the top of the page on the left or right. Good luck!
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Old April 14th, 2004, 08:46 AM
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I was browsing using Firefox on Wn2000.

Not whether you are using fonts in your style sheets, but I only see times NR, Photos page didn't work at all. If I would be a member, I would be a bit pissed at having my e-mail address published on the website. Guestbook looks a bit weird too.

Otherwise, site is fairly functional and serves the purpose..
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Old April 14th, 2004, 01:53 PM
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using Opera 7.11 all i see is a blank page with '>' on it, which is a shame as using IE it looks prety tidy.
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Old April 15th, 2004, 01:43 AM
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Using Firefox - site is nice and simple - links are clear and obvious so it is easy to navigate
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Old April 15th, 2004, 01:44 AM
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Just one thing - shouldn't the login boxes be at side nearer the top, or at the top - they are not too obvious there at the bottom!
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Old April 15th, 2004, 01:41 PM
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the login is only for admins, so i wanted it to be out of the way

also i changed the members area so that the emails are hidden
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Old April 15th, 2004, 03:31 PM
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the login is only for admins, so i wanted it to be out of the way


Ah, I see - quite clever
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Old April 15th, 2004, 03:39 PM
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same reason why i got rid of the:
Username: <textbox> Password: <textbox>
to just the two textboxes with use of javascript to fill them with default values.
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