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Old December 17th, 2004, 06:26 PM
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guardianestateplanning.com/david AND guardianestateplanning.com/richard
Hi. I'm putting together this website for a photographer and I have developed a "demo" layout/design...
http://www.guardianestateplanning.com/david
NOTE: the blank space on the left will be filled in with text


Also, I'm putting together another demo for a tattoo artist that wants a website...
http://www.guardianestateplanning.com/richard



any suggestions, comments, etc??

thanks!!
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Old December 18th, 2004, 02:39 PM
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I think forthe tattooing website you should work more on a light background with a 1px border around the main work. Sort of like how you Have the photography one, but solid border. Maybe I dunno.
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its a nice enough design, although i would suggest giving it more life. maybe add some more colors. i think you should go to your local barnes & noble and read up on website design. you got skill but i think exploring it further through books and learning about colors and design would put you on the right track.
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You seem to really like small grey-scale rectangles that are centered vertically and horizontally. Those don't give much room for content on each page.

If you get books, I recommend books published by O'Reilly.
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