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Old October 1st, 2004, 03:58 AM
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http://cherryblossomart.ntwebsite.net

Take a look at http://cherryblossomart.ntwebsite.net I'm aware that there are some validation problems here and there, I'm working on that. I'm also aware that it looks skrewy in IE, I don't know what to do about that.
What do you think of the layout? Are there any major mistakes etc?

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to help you getting started on the validation problems,

paragraphs cannot contain blocklevel elements,
so <p><h1></h1></p> is not valid,

a document shouldn't contain more than one h1-element.
you should also try to use the right tag for the right job,
<div class="bar"> doesn't give any meaning of the content,
rather use a hn-element here, and then use css to controll the look.
<h2 class="bar">

also inline-elements cannot contain blocklevel elemements,
<span style="float:left; width:300px;"><p id="shouts">
rather use a div tag than a span here,

and instead of using br to create linebreaks in the shout box use paragraphs,
Code:
   <div id="shouts">
     <p><a href="mailto:">name</a> message text</p>
     <p><a href="mailto:">name</a> message text</p>
   </div>

then use css to controll the margins 
#shouts p {
   margin:0;
   padding:0;
}


to read more about semantic and structur in html:
http://www.camaban.co.uk/semanticwhat.php
http://www.webaim.org/techniques/structure/

you got some faults in the css aswell, just a typo i assume,
"size:" should be "font-size:"
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Last edited by Akh : October 1st, 2004 at 04:08 PM. Reason: fixing typo

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O.k. I've redesigned and re-coded the whole thing. What do you think?

http://cherryblossomart.ntwebsite.net

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