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Old November 9th, 2004, 12:31 PM
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http://girlfriendslingerie.com

Hello. First time here. Nice site.

Im looking for a review on my 3 month old store. It is targeted for Women & men between the ages of 18-47 I figure based on products I now have. I am going to be adding more products for an older demograph soon also.

Last google run, I elevated up to a pr4 level, so im happy for that.

Anyways, if anyone has any suggestions or ideas on my site id love to hear from you.

Oh, by the way its a Yahoo Merchant solution store, so im dealing with some funky code at times, yet I am writing my own and changing lots of PRE yahoo settings.

Thank you for your time

Http://girlfriendslingerie.com

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Old November 10th, 2004, 04:44 PM
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The <title> element appeared well and truly keyword-stuffed, yet I could not find any <h1> element at all. Puzzling.

There seemed to be some big empty white spaces on the home page. Perhaps a failure to gracefully degrade for people with ActiveX disabled.

A "hot" sale was promised, but I could not see anything marked as having sale prices. Again, perhaps this is explained by big chunks of info being missing for the non-ActiveX-enabled public. I couldn't tell.

The transition into "Log into Yahoo now!" is certainly a roadbump. I'm sort of curious about how many people fall out at that point, perhaps for fear that somehow Yahoo will be able to ding their credit card even though they haven't yet been able to even find out what the shipping costs might be.

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Old November 10th, 2004, 11:06 PM
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Thanks for the review...I completely changed the front page now...

Im curious as to what you mean to log on now?? please explain.

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Old November 12th, 2004, 05:18 PM
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Very Nice. The pictures and the site that is. The front page is all very good, but the source code could be cleaned up. There are about 25 consecutive
Code:
&nbsp;<p align="center">
tags, which dont do anything.

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Old November 12th, 2004, 05:24 PM
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Thank you so much for the review.. As for the code, i will clean it up some. I am dealing with the yahoo way of things, lots of junk code. Again thank you....

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