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Old August 7th, 2004, 10:57 AM
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hi,
i have been working on my site for a bit, and i am quite pleased, but id like to see if it could be better, so here it is for you guys to have alook at please
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the image at the top won't work, you have to make the path to something on the internet, not on your hard drive.

your site is too simple, and thats coming from someone who usally loves 'simple'.

i think the best think for you to do would be to follow some online tutorials, w3schools have some quite good ones, this should give you a basic grounding in website design.

for a company that is selling web related products, a potential client will want to see a smart, functional website.

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i agree above that the site is to simple for what you want to do with it.....i think if you want people to buy their hosting from you think about hosting your own server.....also buying your own registered .com internet domain might be the way to go....the buttons and the page is just to simple...keep trying you could be on to a good thing...only one way to find out.

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hi

hi and thanx for replying.
well iv done a bit of work on the page to make it a bit less simple, if you would like to have a look.
i have got a .co.uk domain name to 4ward to it for now, but my buisiness partner bought it, and has gone to norway for the next 2 weeks without telling me it...which was nice of him.
i also have a redesign of the current page, but the topbar (km web development) is a flash, and it looks really good, but for some reason after uploading the page and file, it doesnt seem to be working.
the copy of that is one is temporarily being hosted on here.
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my flash player says it hasn't loaded, perhaps there is something wrong with the flash movie, or maybe with the code you're using to place the movie in the page:

at the moment you have:

PHP Code:
<object classid="clsid:D27CDB6E-AE6D-11cf-96B8-444553540000" codebase="http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab#version=6,0,29,0" width="814" height="68">
    <
param name="movie" value="topbar%20flash.fla">
<
param name="quality" value="high">
    <
embed src="topbar%20flash.fla" quality="high" pluginspage="http://www.macromedia.com/go/getflashplayer" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="814" height="68"></embed></object


i would use (this is the only valid way i've found to embed flash):

PHP Code:
<object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" data="topbar%20flash.fla" width="814" height="68">
<
param name="movie" value="topbar%20flash.fla" />
</
object


i don't know much about flash, but should it not be a .swf file rather than .fla?

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thanx

thankyou, ill try that.
i thought it should have been a .swf file aswell, but my copy of flash is telling me otherwise - ill have a change around on it
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