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Old August 10th, 2005, 03:14 AM
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Hello friends, I want to have some sugesstions on my website for friendship. the url is http://www.bepenfriends.com


I hope i will get some frank sugesstions in design, loading spead, usablity, navigation and other design issues.

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The site looks good, but very plain. Sites like this usually need to be eye catching. You'll need a little more flare.

Also, keep your font sizes the same. There are a few pieces of text that are bigger than the rest on the right.

There's no reason to have a page title that long other than keyword stuffing. Google is smart. I wouldn't push your limits.


On an unrelated note, you should not be manually adding a signature to your posts. If a mod sees it your post will be edited and your links removed. Restricted users aren't allowed to have signatures for a reason.
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Thank you for your sugesstion, actually I am Redesigning the site again with new look and feel. This is a startup design. I used this design becuase of the loading spead. This design don't have images so loads fast.

Regarding Keywords, I think i am not stuffing my keywords entirely in title but i do for some keywords. It is not like other sites like title only with keywords. There will be a meaning in my title.

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Regarding Keywords, I think i am not stuffing my keywords entirely in title but i do for some keywords. It is not like other sites like title only with keywords. There will be a meaning in my title.

You don't have to convince us, you have to convince robots that do not comprehend human languages. If they determine that there are likely to be more keywords in your title than sense, you will likely be penalised, no matter how well meant your very long title was. Bear this in mind.
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