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Old March 16th, 2004, 10:31 PM
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My site has been done for a while but i never had anyone really look at it and let me know what they thought, so take a look and let me know.

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Old March 18th, 2004, 02:23 AM
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Looks nice, loads quick.

I browsed briefly around your site, and I have no idea what the purpose of it is though.
Is it all based on what you sell on eBay?

Need to check your HTML a bit, missing alt tags, and a few errors here and there.

Nice design though.
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Old March 18th, 2004, 04:50 AM
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I have to agree with the above comments, it seems your doing something but you never really explain what that something is. More content and less header graphic would be nice
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It doesn't valid as W3C HTML 4.01 Transitional like your !DOCTYPE says (Mainly because your HTML attributes are not quoted and alt text is required for all images per the W3C recommendation).

It also does not have any alt or longdesc text for the navigation images. This makes it very hard to navigate through your site on Lynx and other text browsers (such as Links2 , etc.).

You also should not use <h_></h_> tags to make the text a certain size. That's what things like CSS are for. Only use those heading tags for outlining your pages. (per W3C's recommendation)

Also, you should be using & in your links instead of just & per W3C's recommendation.

All in all, though, if you fix it up, I think it'd be a really nice site.
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Very impressive, but your samples look better than the actual website. Maybe you should work on that...

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Nice graphics as well

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I just want to rant a litle about the fact that all the screenshots on your samples page are taken using M$ IE. I personally recommend against it. I recommend that you use Mozilla Firefox instead. Okay, I'm done. I do however, like the eye-candy you made Win XP into

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