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Old January 15th, 2004, 08:05 AM
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have a review please...

Hi,

Have just finished this simple site and would like a bit of feedback as it is my first one... any comments are welcome. Like I say I know its real simple but better to start off on a good foot eh?

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Old January 15th, 2004, 08:14 AM
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Quite nice.

Renders nice in Firebird and downloads quickly (though I am using T1 connection )

The only real thing I would comment on, well actually 2, are:
1: the pages have invalid html, for example : http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=h...nline&verbose=1

I would fix that. The other thing was that there is a link to "gallery" on the man page, but not anywhere else - this is not major of course, as it isn't essential to the site - just a comment in passing.

Maybe the grey is a bit dull (can't really comment on that though I have grey background on one of my sites)...

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Old January 15th, 2004, 08:19 AM
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thanks!

Thanks jabba,

I did do the validate thing and I can tidy up some of the easier ones, but the hardest part was trying to get rid of the height = "100%" for the tables, to make sure the tables in the middle are the same height, no matter how much writing the one next to it has... w3c tells me "height = " is invalid... but it works so what could I do? (not really the forum for this iI know... (*slaps own hand*))

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Re: thanks!

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Thanks jabba,

I did do the validate thing and I can tidy up some of the easier ones, but the hardest part was trying to get rid of the height = "100%" for the tables, to make sure the tables in the middle are the same height, no matter how much writing the one next to it has... w3c tells me "height = " is invalid... but it works so what could I do? (not really the forum for this iI know... (*slaps own hand*))
Code:
<table style="height: 100%;">
Try putting all your attributes in styleshhet, that will eliminate that problem.

Another thing to note is, for example:
Code:
<td colspan = "2" width = "100%" valign = "top">
, should be
Code:
<td colspan="2" width="100%" valign="top">
, the spacing my give some browsers problems. However, this it gettting completely off topic

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It's a bit of a shame you have to find the gallery to see a picture of the cafe.

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