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Old September 22nd, 2004, 09:02 PM
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Cool http://www.coldhearted.net/beta/alpha/
Hello DevShed visitors!

I need everyone to please evaluate and give comments on: Alpha and Beta.

I am going to need the comments from all around... But on Alpha, ignore the various image placeholds, et cetera... Only important images are there.

Also, ignore the random text, I just need comments on the navigation, images, where the ad is, et cetera...

Thanks in advanced!
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Old September 22nd, 2004, 10:46 PM
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it doesnt seem like you have any consistant design for any page on either alpha or beta. i would chose one design layout to go with and then work from there on each page first
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Old September 23rd, 2004, 10:16 PM
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The reason I was asking for people to evaluate, was because I wanted to see what other people thought about them and which one they liked the best.
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Old September 28th, 2004, 07:41 PM
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Alpha is a bit boring... looks like 1,000 other template sites. Beta is a little better, but it's a bit too busy... busy banner text, busy little crawl, busy blurry images, busy busy type everywhere. Maybe try something a little in between A & B. I would move your center panel ("It's free") to line up with the menu & the ads. Move the crawl somewhere... far far away... try to stick to no more than three different type faces. Unify your color scheme. Make the banner type easier to read. Good luck!
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Old September 29th, 2004, 10:00 PM
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Okay... Aidrice I have taken your suggestions and made a simple, easy to navigation, self explainitory homepage!

The page has 15 images to load (total: 89kb), has a login form (2 questions), a signup form (5 questions), and a Q&A.

I really need everyone's opinion on this and if anyone has suggestions to PLEASE e-mail them to coldhearted.webhosting[at]gmail[dot]com. That way I can archive and review at my leasure.
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Old September 30th, 2004, 12:56 AM
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hey solitarygeek.... looks great! Very cool, has pizzaz but not too busy. You're fast, too! Good luck with the venture.
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Old October 2nd, 2004, 11:37 PM
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Thanks aidrice.

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