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Old August 8th, 2008, 01:17 AM
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Thumbs up Http://www.cometosandiego.com/weekendvisit/index.php

i am in the middle of a site redesign so could you check it out and let me know what you like, what you dont like, tips on how to make it look better so on so forth....

I know the following

---I know the header text w/ a pink back ground needs to be fixed

---the cloud tags will be changed to rlitive links but i just wanted to fill the area to see how i like it...

---i know the actuall code has errors

THanks in advance
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Old August 8th, 2008, 09:12 AM
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i am in the middle of a site redesign so could you check it out and let me know what you like, what you dont like, tips on how to make it look better so on so forth....

I know the following

---I know the header text w/ a pink back ground needs to be fixed

---the cloud tags will be changed to rlitive links but i just wanted to fill the area to see how i like it...

---i know the actuall code has errors

THanks in advance
http://www.cometosandiego.com/weekendvisit/index.php



anyone???????

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Old August 8th, 2008, 01:29 PM
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The tabs are a little too light for my liking, kind of faint. The tabs also take a while to load, with the 'requesting content' text. It seems that every time they are clicked they have to be loaded. Could you get this to load with the whole page?

Clicking accommodations (which I believe is spelled incorrectly on your page) results in a page with " /> at the top. You can delete this and change the meta tag just before it to:

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<meta name="Description" content="Complete San Diego vacation planning guide including details on events, attractions, clubs, restaurants, hotels and more!" />


You were missing the slash. Do you use WYSIWYG in the design view?

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Old August 8th, 2008, 02:58 PM
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Old August 8th, 2008, 03:55 PM
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Old August 8th, 2008, 07:22 PM
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Why?


loads for me... ummmmmm



for the main page i have 3 sets of tabs

is that 2 much? is that to tricky or tacky?

should i put the bottom tabs in the regular navigation or along the footer instead?

and do i have to many links in the left and right nav?

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Like it.

There should be a site title or something in the picture though -
some sort of identification

Love the google ads - sweden maps: very relevant..
I would question the placement of the ads on site.

I know this is what they advise and lots of people do this,
but I would maybe visit 55 San Diego Attractions before getting to the main part of your page..

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Old August 9th, 2008, 05:01 AM
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I would maybe visit 55 San Diego Attractions before getting to the main part of your page


Good-- i am not selling anything or i have no service to offer so if someone clicks 55 attractions google ad i win

did u click it?? lol

side note-- i do have a page title
"San Diego Attractions, San Diego Activities And things to check out"

y would sweeden show up.... i always have problems getting relevant ads though like right now bank of America is up and my page has absolutely nothing to do with banks or loans or any thing of the sort..?

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Originally Posted by shortybookit
loads for me... ummmmmm



for the main page i have 3 sets of tabs

is that 2 much? is that to tricky or tacky?

should i put the bottom tabs in the regular navigation or along the footer instead?

and do i have to many links in the left and right nav?
I know, it was loading for me as well :S.

The tabs are fine, I can just hardly see them on my laptop. You could put an outline or whatever or change them to light blue if you wanted to make them clearer.

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Old August 9th, 2008, 01:27 PM
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You could put an outline or whatever or change them to light blue if you wanted to make them clearer.



will add that to things to do list

thanks...

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I get a 404 w/ the link provided but when I go to the root dir I think you have some bugs and when first coming to the page I don't really know what this site is about the header is just a picture.

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erm.. i've never been to san diego but i picture like sun and sea... then i arrive at your site to be greeted by a picture of a dark street with what looks like snow...
Just a thought...

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