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Old December 12th, 2003, 03:32 PM
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Review my site.

Ok there isnt' much content besides the CSS and main page but I would like some opinions please. Good or bad, thanks. This site will be aimed at tattoo flash design and my web gallery. Opnions!!!!!!!

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Old December 12th, 2003, 03:51 PM
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love the graphics, but the links on the left seem a little hard to read, you might want to tone down the background under the left menu. you also might want to think about a better way to get people into your site without all those choices. It'll be annoying for people that already have flash. Check out http://www.coolhomepages.com/newstatic/Flash/1.html for some cool loading ideas. You might want to autodetect or something. But, great-looking Flash site, love the graphics! Check out http://www.nasi.com/test.htm and critique if you get a chance. I'm trying to get some feedback too.

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As a general rule, avoid 'intro' pages. Just let users go straight to your homepage when they visit your URL.

The graphics are pretty, but overdone. For instance, the navigation text is obscured by the images, making it difficult to read each option. Graphic design should never detract from readability or navigation.
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Thanks for the critiques. It is so obvious I have a long way to go. Someday though. Thanks.

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