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Old July 6th, 2005, 08:10 PM
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Hi,

Please can you all review my latest project.

The site is almost complete, just a few changes in the text and have to fix the 1 problem to validate the HTML.

Anyway here is the site: www.dreamstatecreations.com ( SOFTWARE IS NOT LIVE AS YET )

All feedback welcome...

Thanks,
Mike
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jsKid agrees: nearly valid HTML and valid CSS... yea!
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Old July 6th, 2005, 09:57 PM
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looks good...
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Download [ Fx | Op ] Validate [ Markup | Css ]
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Old July 7th, 2005, 12:42 PM
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I like it alot! The only thing I would fix is the top margin is a little to large! Overall A+
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Old July 9th, 2005, 11:27 AM
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I like it alot! The only thing I would fix is the top margin is a little too large! Overall A+

Agreed.
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Old July 9th, 2005, 11:56 AM
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has spelling errors...

Here are some that I noticed... other than some confusing
grammar at times.

Internet ...
"data such as temparart" --> temporary

Startup Config...
"time in your bot up process" --> boot

Toolbar Minim...
"MSN icons you cab have " --> can
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Old July 9th, 2005, 02:18 PM
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BonRouge & dayzeday - I will change the top margin down a little bit

jsKid - Thanks for the spelling mistakes - as i mentioned initially I still have to read through it all and change spelling mistakes and grammer.

Keep the comments coming
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Old July 20th, 2005, 06:37 AM
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Nice site. Very clean looking.

Especially the girl on the front.

She tops it off.
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Old July 21st, 2005, 03:59 PM
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Nice site. Very clean looking.

Especially the girl on the front.

She tops it off.


Thanks stoney.... and it cant halm to have a nice looking girl on the front page
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Old July 25th, 2005, 11:54 AM
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Here at dreamstate creations we are pleased to announce the release of YourWindows. This powerful piece of software includes 5 built-in tools to help you make windows exactly as you want it and help you keep your information safe!

Capitalize 'windows', since it is a product.
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Old July 25th, 2005, 10:17 PM
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It's a nice site. Good layout and graphics. The shade of green is too bright for me, though, but it seems to work out best.
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The formmail program that you use for the contact page is horribly insecure. I can use it to send emails to anyone, with pretty much any message, through your server. Use another one or see if there is a better way to use this one.

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So how does one go about sending mail through that form? Sorry to sound foolish, but my boss favours this 'FormMail' program and now I might have a reason to use a better PHP solution...
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