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    critique S.V.P.


    So, i built this page for a band i know and i'm just looking for some criticism. It's fairly simple and uses very basic colors. i'm still waiting for art work from the band...
    http://www.everydayfame.tk
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    first impressions: very neat, polished and clean looking.
    i take it there would be a picture or something on the home page when it's finished? a blank page doesn't exactly grab your attention
    i like the mouseover effect but even with that i did feel the site was a little too clinical for my liking - i think some more colour would brighten it up although i do tend to o/d on that!
    when the images are added that could add sufficient interest anyway...
    btw i used win xp ie6 @ 1024x768 to view the site.
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    yeah there will be tonnes of pics once the band gets their photo shoot done and i'll be working with photoshop to get everything looking great. and i agree, right now it's very clinical..but don't worry, i'll be changing that. this had just started as a temp page but they liked the layout.
    cheers
    andrew cartmill
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    Cartmill,

    Please read through this thread:
    http://forums.devshed.com/t78549/s.html

    Your subject should be the name of the site you'd like reviewed. I've changed the subject line for you this time.

    Thanks.

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    I like the site. It looks "artsy" without using a lot of Flash or DHTML tricks that don't work in every browser.

    You need a new message board, though... seriously. Check out Invision Power Board at www.invisionboard.com. It's free.

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    sorry Groove, that was my own dumb fault for not reading the rulez.
    and thx sepodati, it's only still there because i haven't had a chance to work out some phpbb stuff...i also have to get a server set up because the provider hosting the page doesn't support php

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