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Old September 13th, 2003, 11:10 PM
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So, i built this page for a band i know and i'm just looking for some criticism. It's fairly simple and uses very basic colors. i'm still waiting for art work from the band...
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first impressions: very neat, polished and clean looking.
i take it there would be a picture or something on the home page when it's finished? a blank page doesn't exactly grab your attention
i like the mouseover effect but even with that i did feel the site was a little too clinical for my liking - i think some more colour would brighten it up although i do tend to o/d on that!
when the images are added that could add sufficient interest anyway...
btw i used win xp ie6 @ 1024x768 to view the site.
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yeah there will be tonnes of pics once the band gets their photo shoot done and i'll be working with photoshop to get everything looking great. and i agree, right now it's very clinical..but don't worry, i'll be changing that. this had just started as a temp page but they liked the layout.
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Cartmill,

Please read through this thread:
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Your subject should be the name of the site you'd like reviewed. I've changed the subject line for you this time.

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I like the site. It looks "artsy" without using a lot of Flash or DHTML tricks that don't work in every browser.

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sorry Groove, that was my own dumb fault for not reading the rulez.
and thx sepodati, it's only still there because i haven't had a chance to work out some phpbb stuff...i also have to get a server set up because the provider hosting the page doesn't support php
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