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http://www.hiphopstore.be
This is one of my sites let me know what you think of it. I am working on a new version so any critiques will come in handy for the next version..
Check it out here; http://www.hiphopstore.be |
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I almost never say this: but you would need some more graphical elements in there. some sort of menu system. also you need to get more structure on your site. All those words on the top is annoying.
The color scheme should be expanded into more colors. Its kinda dull now. Good luck with the redesign!
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For the most part, your site lacks basic organization. It looks like you decided what needed to be on there, ie: top 10 products, a paragraph with all the brands offered, etc, and threw them on there.
Try setting the products up in a table or as KenPed said, some menu system. Also think about a clear navigation to allow easier manuevering between your sites sections. G'luck. |
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I totally agree on the menu system you guys r talking about. That was one of the main reasons I decided to go for a new version. Like it is now it definetly misses a global structure around the whole site.
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Your main page has the following warning:
Warning: mysql_fetch_object(): supplied argument is not a valid MySQL result resource in /home/httpd/vhosts/hiphopstore.be/httpdocs/index.php on line 39 The load times for the larger images of your T's is really long, and I have a fast cable connection. |
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Your site needs a theme. It is too sterile. I don't feel it appeals to the target audience. Who do you want to purchase your product?
Add some Bling Bling, Colour, and better menu/navigation system. |
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I made some changes. It s not perfect yet some stuff still under construction.
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The code for your top menu is really bizarre... what with all the empty <b> tags? There are definitely better ways of doing that...
The design is good though... I would suggest using the colors from that picture in the rest of the page, like the menus especially... keep the same theme... you may even want to change the background color... You need people in the hip hop crowd thinking, "This is where I want to buy my stuff." |
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