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Old January 28th, 2005, 06:10 PM
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Hello,

I have just finished redoing my site. Your comments are appreciated.

www.jwwebdesign.info

Sincerely,
Jeff Wickenheiser
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Old January 29th, 2005, 05:32 AM
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Old January 29th, 2005, 09:02 AM
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it needs ALOT of work, ill start off by saying its very moncolor, that means you just have gray/white as your main colors, very very bland and boring.
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Old January 29th, 2005, 09:16 AM
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Because the service you are providing is web design it needs to look spot on.

- The fonts dont tie in all that well, especially the heading and paragraph text.

- The navigation buttons could have rounder edges as they are a bit rough

- The text on the navigation buttons could stand out a bit more.

- Maybe design using compliant code? This will give the impression that your service is more professional. After checking your page there are 19 errors. Using the W3 standard ensures compatability with all browsers. Making the changes shouldnt be hard to do.

Good luck with your site
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Old January 29th, 2005, 11:22 AM
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Hi,

You website is good but....
Its a bit plain, I would suggest adding some more, colourfull graphics into the site, its too plain at the moment.
Your navigation bar at the tops bugs me.... i dont know why
Make your fonts a bit more attractive, have variation in text size, diffrent colours maybe
Whats up with the lits of links at the bottom? Maybe have a seperate links page or make them neat and tidy at the bottom of your page.

Hope this helps,

Aphonik
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Old January 29th, 2005, 12:12 PM
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Your site doesn't cater for people that run 800x600. There's an amazing amount of people that still make use of lower resolutions. As the others said. The site also needs more color.
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Thank you for the input.

I will test different fonts, and try to add some pictures/color. Images seem hard to make/find/buy, but I will see what I can do.

I am more of a PHP/MySQL programmer, so unfortunately I may not present myself as well as I would like.

Jeff
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Old February 21st, 2005, 11:16 PM
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It seems really plain, could use some color (if you need some graphics, you can try The Gimp, its a nice program)
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lose the comic sans font...
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Old February 25th, 2005, 04:14 PM
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Hi,

Very plain...use some more graphic.

And definitely some different font. Verdana or Tahoma.

Cheers,
Jan
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