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Old February 12th, 2005, 07:15 PM
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http://www.paisonce.com.ar/english

I have make the traduction (and the original) of this website about a zone of a city. I would like to hear your opinions about the page. I'm specially intereseted to know if it is clear the English spelling and if it is easy to understand the content.
The site is in: http://www.paisonce.com.ar/english
If you want to give any other opinion of the colours or content too.
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Old February 13th, 2005, 01:10 AM
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Old February 14th, 2005, 09:30 AM
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Your text is generally pretty good though a bit off in some places.

On your nav I think the colors there would look better were they more closely matched to the darkened portions of your header, primarily the building.

The thumbnails to the right might look better if you were to put an outline around them, be it small or big, black or golden.

Looks like your header got the rough end of the quality stick.

G'luck.

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Old February 14th, 2005, 07:49 PM
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Thanks MaxM very much for your opinion.
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