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When attempting to view your latest drafts I was greeted by an arduous loading time* far exceeding what many customers would care to sit through.

I took BADMoJo's comments regarding e-commerce sites as quite true. Many sites out there look designed to take money and not provide any form of originality or personal touch. While it's not a bad thing to have a professional site, a clean site, or a great looking site, it is bad to have a site without zing, without flare or appeal.

*I'm on T1.

uhm, they're just gifs and not the actual site yet, so of course a full photoshop gif is going to take a long time to load. Why would I convert a draft into a site (actual html/code/etc) before I was certain it was worth my time?

secondly, i feel that the newest draft does have something friendly about it. It's professionalism is toned down a bit and its friendliness has been focused on quiet a bit. So, i feel the newest draft will help customers feel more comfortable with buying from me.

not my cup o tea
but i see where youre going
it would appeal to those corporate grannies

i like robots and halfnaked goth girls. i had enough corporate propaganda in grade school.

nice second draft, gets the idea of friendly across, but dont go too far as to look goofy and like clowns, not the evile clowns, but the retarded ones people just laugh at because their lives are weird.