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Old April 17th, 2005, 06:41 PM
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http://www.raglantraining.co.uk/car
The American Car Experience

The site is not finished yet, but any feedback so far would be much appreciated.

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Old April 18th, 2005, 05:04 AM
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same. But your site atm is not that bad.
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Old April 19th, 2005, 05:33 AM
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Sorry people.
Posted the site up on some temporary space..

NEW LINK

www.theamericancarexperience.com

Just the one page ATM, to show design & layout.
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Nice setup...

I'm not sure if it looks "professional" enough for a website trying to sell multi-thousand dollar cars. It would be perfect for a site devoted to reviewing american cars.

You misspelled lengthy near the bottom.

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I think the professionalism is ok for your audience. Chances are you will be selling to young to middle aged people with money to blow on a fancy new car. So flare in your website I don't think will hurt any.
Just make sure you change your URL on the bottom right
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Old April 21st, 2005, 10:10 AM
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Ok its 98% done.

Please Critique.........

www.theamericancarexperience.com
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In your catalogue, I would suggest rearranging the logos to have a couple columns at least. This way more fit on one screen.
On your order screen, I think you have a typo. You have the word "vechals". Did you mean "vehicles"?
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