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Old July 16th, 2005, 04:59 PM
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http://www.retrovertigo.co.uk/

It's been a long time since I've been here! Anyway, my reason is simple; I need your opinions on my new site. All comments are welcome, again, both here and on the site.

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Old July 16th, 2005, 05:35 PM
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-Takes a long time to load.

-Bit plain, I'd ad a logo image. and maybe some kind of cellpic image for the dark gray sidebar.


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Old July 16th, 2005, 06:21 PM
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Heya!

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Takes a long time to load.

Ditto! I hope you're serving it off a palm pilot somewhere in the Outer Herbrides?

Design
Very good!
  • Content is nice and clear
  • All your headers are well defined
  • The changing of colour of header and links is a nice touch

Under the hood
You know I'm a semantics nut case, and we've discussed it a little before, so I'll just say its an improvement over the last one

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Old July 17th, 2005, 12:24 AM
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Really simple... almost too simple. When I go to a site, I want to see something new and interesting. I won't even go to web hosting sites anymore because they are all built off of the same template, lol. Your site doesn't seem to have anything that stands out and makes me mentally set it apart from the rest. Other than that, I like it. Good info organization and spacing and everything.

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Old July 19th, 2005, 08:26 AM
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I changed the site around slightly. Bearing in mind that images are coming soon, hopefully adding a bit more colour, are there any other comments people have? Any suggestions, perhaps?

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Old July 20th, 2005, 03:26 AM
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You stingy gits =P

Does anybody have an opinion on me site, or is your silence a suggestion? =O

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Old July 20th, 2005, 09:28 AM
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Meh! I might as well give some more as you seem so desperate

I liked the coloured title! why did you change it to a boring grey?

The menu isn't all that clear, when I first saw it I wasn't sure if it was a menu, quotes or some such

I like the general layout of your blog entries.

Perhaps you could play with the idea of a variable width site? Fixed width is boring IMO.

As for mark-up:

It validates, which is all well and good, but I'm not sure it is really in the spirit of (x)html...

Code:
<p><b>Backend Improvements</b></p>

should be
Code:
<h3>Backend Improvements</h3>


Also, links should have title attributes!

Oh well, you asked for it! I hope it helps

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Old July 20th, 2005, 12:19 PM
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Meh! I might as well give some more as you seem so desperate

I liked the coloured title! why did you change it to a boring grey?

The menu isn't all that clear, when I first saw it I wasn't sure if it was a menu, quotes or some such

I like the general layout of your blog entries.

Perhaps you could play with the idea of a variable width site? Fixed width is boring IMO.

As for mark-up:

It validates, which is all well and good, but I'm not sure it is really in the spirit of (x)html...

Code:
<p><b>Backend Improvements</b></p>

should be
Code:
<h3>Backend Improvements</h3>


Also, links should have title attributes!

Oh well, you asked for it! I hope it helps


And so we trade comments back and forth again! I was thinking of having a new heading section, and I've currently got one idea that I'm working on tonight. Personally, I thought the menu was obvious, but I'm going to use a similar idea to my planned heading section to change that area ever so slightly. The H3 idea, it's another good idea. I'll change that later. As for the changing width idea, I like it. I'll play around with it.

Finally, as for the title on links idea, I don't agree with it. It seems pointless, and I wouldn't have control over links that other people posted (because nobody will bother putting the title in themselves!), so I won't be changing that.

Thanks for the reply, again! There's always somebody you can trust =P

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I completely redesigned the website, so new opinions and critiques are needed =)

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I just added a comment to id/record/thought number 788...which shouldn't exist... Might want to check your validation, there... OOps... just added some JavaScript to the page, too... might want to fix that. :/

Loading your page seems to trigger GET requests to http://stuweb.cms.gre.ac.uk/~hm325/rv/undefined, also, which is a 404.

You, uh, might want to filter how many To: addresses (email addresses in the form) you allow, too... I think I just sent you 30 emails. Ooops.

Oh wait... did you want comments on the design? OH! It's, uh... okay. Nothing very exciting about it, but it's your site. I do like plain, minimalistic sites, but your's is a little too bare.

Let me know if you want help with the PHP issues...

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Another small redesign was forthcoming, and I changed a few things around. As for the PHP problems, I haven't managed to fix them yet. I'm not too sure if your comments were relevant to what I was asking for, though

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Looks alright. The menu hover just makes the selection dissappear for me. I'm in IE.

Middle mouse click doesn't seem to work. Not keen on that at all. I love middle mouse!!
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Old August 9th, 2005, 02:49 AM
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The menu is meant to disappear. As for 'middle mouse' clicking, I've done nothing to stop this working...

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