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Old October 14th, 2004, 11:50 PM
Elias Montoya Elias Montoya is offline
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http://www.sweetheartgames.com

I seriously believe my site needs a workout...

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Old October 15th, 2004, 08:03 PM
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I agree that you site could use a workout.

IMO, the background image is too busy, especially when you put text on top of it. That just makes the text harder to read. I personally like to have paragraph text on a solid background if at all possible.

The logo image does not load for me.

I think you could seriously benefit from a more structured layout. There just doesn't seem to be any cohesive structure to the site. They text, though in blocks, seems to be arranged randomly. I know I'm not explaining this really well, but try to arrange the content better.
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Old October 16th, 2004, 09:45 AM
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Not the worse site I've ever seen, but some extra work woulde be useful.

First, make our lives easier and make link clickable in your post.


Don't use so many fonts at once, stick to 'verdana' font. And more pages would be very good, because it is not good to put so much information on one or two pages.

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