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Old February 4th, 2005, 10:56 PM
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http://www.theflume.net

http://www.theflume.net - done by me with Adobe Photoshop Elements 3.0, CSS (just a little), HTML, and PHP.

If you want to see some of my reviews of other websites (kindah fits in the theme of this board here - Website Critiques) then check out the articles section.

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Old February 5th, 2005, 02:44 AM
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Hey,

That background really annoys me. Change it! Also at the moment your site has no "depth". Add some contrastng colours, more images and change that font. I like the rest of the site, its great.

Keep up the good work

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Old February 5th, 2005, 09:18 AM
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Aphonik - yah, ur the second person to ask me to change the bg, im workin on it. Ive also considered re-making some of the graphics and putting out like a V2.1

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Old February 5th, 2005, 09:20 AM
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Excellent, cant wait to see the site when its done,

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Yea I agree with Aphonik. Also throw in some CSS at the links to make it look more smooth. Make a header logo that blends in with the background so you can halve the size of it.

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WOW ya dont be drunk and look at that backround for to long..... Ya just might get the spins........ LOL

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Fixed it up a bit, got rid of the bg and added some navigation img's

waddya think now?

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Excellent, Im glad you got rid of that background and I really like the navigation images. The only thing I would suggest now is stretching that top banner across the whole of that top box.

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Excellent, Im glad you got rid of that background and I really like the navigation images. The only thing I would suggest now is stretching that top banner across the whole of that top box.

Aphonik
Thanks

the reason i dont make the banner any bigger than it is, is so that people in 800 x 600 screen resolutions (blind people or old people or people who cant figure out how to change their screen resolution) would see it all messed up - the table with the main img would be all stretched out. Hope that helps to explain things

thanks again for the comments

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TBH, don't like the font you are using. But the main thing I think is that when you click on a sub link, eg: Tips > winXP, the side menu dissapears.
Your coding tutorials would benefit from some color coding, and the content (php form) should have some sort of disclaimer stating that there is no validation in the example and is open to abuse a bit :-)
As stated by someone earlier, you would definately benifit from using CSS a bit more - and your HTML is invalid - you won't get your coding examples taken particulary seriously(IMHO) when your coding isn't up to standard.
Also, you don't really define what the purpose of your site is - always helps.

Hope I haven't been too harsh.
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Old February 7th, 2005, 03:06 PM
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decent - simple and effective.

Might want to add a background ? Mod the graphics to the left, and a new table arrangement.
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Ok everyone, Version three is in the works, ive finished the template but am working on a lot of other stuff to get up for the release. Its a lot nicer than any other versions so far. If you want to see a preview (most of the pages dont load and the php is still a bit sketchy, but you can check out the design nonetheless): http://www.theflume.net/vtres

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