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Old August 16th, 2005, 01:32 PM
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Hi,
just got this one posted...let me know your thoughts.

There's not a whole lot of the content posted yet, just thinkin' structure-wise etc..

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I get a bit of a horizontal scroll when I resize my browser to 800*600.
I think your actual content should be shifted a bit to the right (I am using FX), it sits slightly off-center... Otherwise nice looking site.

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Old August 17th, 2005, 09:12 AM
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hmm, strange about the scrolling...not sure why that'd be. It was built around 800x600. I'll look into that...and yes, it is slightly off-center. That's to do with the menu buttons size...i'm looking into that as well.

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The overall design is not bad at all but, I'm not feeling the orange. The buttons can use some improvement.

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@WebInsanity - when reviewing the colour scheme, keep in mind it's a Harley-Davidson site...orange, black and grey are the company colours...and 'can use some improvement' is a little vague...care to elaborate?

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Make them look some smoother with a white stroke around the text and drop shadow. Also try reducing the opactiy of the text stroke once it's added.

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Thanks for the advice...thing is, I don't agree with adding a stroke. Reason being, is that they don't always look the greatest when they're thin and then optimized for web. I also didn't add a drop shadow because i didn't want the text to stand out over the button itself.

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