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Old November 15th, 2004, 03:15 PM
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http://www.weballianz.net

It is a web hosting company..but it isn't finish and English is poor

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Old November 17th, 2004, 10:50 AM
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The "Hosting" box in the main area looks nice. I suggest you make the rest of the boxes (Personal Hosting, Web Development etc) consistent with the first box.
I'm not very fond about the navigation link images, especially the background, but maybe that's just me.
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Hello,

I hope you can understand me ok

I like your site, it has a clean design and I can see the info I want easily. You seem to have a mix of image and text headers and also background colours on the boxes, which looks slightly strange. It is also very confusing/near on impossible to navigate using a text browser (similar to what blind people or search engine bots/spiders will see). I suggest you specify some nice alt="" tags in your images.

You also don't really have any error checking on your forms, like the Developing Contact Form. I managed to submit that just by clicking the button without filling in any fields.

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Old November 17th, 2004, 12:09 PM
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Thank you...

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Try taking the drop shadow of the line and 3 boxes from logo, it makes it look inconsistent.

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Old November 19th, 2004, 08:51 AM
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New version

Try the new version...

http://www.weballianz.net/weballianzv1/

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Old November 19th, 2004, 09:42 AM
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Avoid using this red : #FF0000 it looks horrible.

Other then that, it looks better but having no logo looks a bit odd...

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Oh yeah and way to graphics heavy, half of that could be done without using images..

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Old November 19th, 2004, 11:36 AM
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Yes.. I know... I will use tables and I will have a logo..but this is a beta version..it is only design...

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