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Old February 16th, 2005, 12:11 PM
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Please tell me what you think about this desing..

Note that text is DUMMY..and site has only one page..the rest is generated dynamically, but I not upload the engine yet

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Old February 16th, 2005, 04:44 PM
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Site looks great.

One thing you're in dire need of is a logo. The only immediatly visible place to view the title of your page outside of the browser title and url is your h1 tag. Note that according to a recent study most all of internet viewers first look at the top left of your page. That being the case, that's probahly where you'll want to put it.

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yeah it looks good

i agree you do need to brand your site bit better but thats nothing to hard to do.

One other suggestion/ critique is that i don't like the change in font on the right hand side as you scroll down under the ecommerce picture.

I think if you change that to the same font and weight as the one under the 24 7 picture it would sit better on the page.

Other than that looking good

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Thank you very much. Your suggestions are good.

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Try changing it into a div layout, you'll find loading time is greatly reduced.

Apart from that it's a good layout.
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Its a bit square, try adding some nice curves.
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