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http://www.webextremeph.com/
I need a critiques for my website, including the pricing and the writing. visit my website http://www.webextremeph.com/ . Still not finish
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From the looks of it you are a very good content oriented designer. Unfortunately that style doesn't work very well for a web design companys page.
I think a snazzy picture up there on the top would add loads to the visual aspect to it but over all I think the color scheme is a bit dull and boring. Like I said adding pictures would help a lot. Try adding some different font-based images for your headers maybe. I would kill the solid gray background and put some type of texture in there instead. Content is good throughout the site. You need to fix the link in your portfolio to get rid of the extra "1" in www.landlord4111.com. Kill the google ads. They look cheesy and the last thing you want to do is have people click away from your page. Before you launch it you're going to want to run it through a html validator as it's not validating as xhtml1.1 I think thats enough for now. Good Luck! |
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my site is in the early stage of development, still need to design a header for my website. Im focusing for the fast loading of page, that's why i used only text and css to color the whole page. I will soon make a background image, thanks for the tips. I really appreaciate it.
. I already added a header on my website. does the header match the theme color of the website which is orange ? I like to hear more cretiques please anybody ? Thanks Last edited by kenmaster : June 6th, 2005 at 12:05 PM. |
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I already redesign my website, please i need a feedback regarding the design and the loading of page.
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good site, but i would get rid of the ads, they detract from the classy/proffessional feel your site has. Also get rid of the noise as you rollover the buttons, that just gets annoying.
As for page loading its was pretty good over dialup so not much to worry about there. Oh yeah, nearly forgot.. justify the text, dont make it all left aligned it looks naff on large amounts of text, imo. - Thoku |
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Too much color action IMO. You got green, combined with a blue logo, and green-to-orange links, plus an orange favicon. It doesn't fit. I'd say drop at least one color.
Otherwise, very nice job!
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@thoku
about the sound on the rollover button, is it really annoying ? i really like the sound on the button =( . About the ads, I think i will keep it for a while since i dont have yet a content.=) @Kokoro about the color , i really dont know what's the best color combination for my sites, so i combine my old theme color website with the new design . the theme color of the old site is orange. thanks for the nice feedback. ![]() |
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i'm going to agree with thoku on the sound issue...they may seem neat at first, but get really annoying really fast...also, I'm going to agree about the colours...i'd probably say lose the green for a different shade of blue...or maybe even a yellow or something like that.
other than that, looks good !
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Flash for navigation? bleh...
You've got some validation issues in your contact form, too. Put "><script>alert(document.cookie);</script> as your name, for example, or </textarea><script>alert(document.cookie);</script> as the message (leave everything else blank). Use htmlentities() on data before you put it back into a form element. ---John Holmes... |
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@Sepodati
thanks for the validation issue. To all thanks, i will consider some of the issue about the color. thanks |
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