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Old March 2nd, 2005, 04:57 PM
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heres a site i made, let me know what you think

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Old March 2nd, 2005, 05:15 PM
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What is up with the use of the debian logo?
http://www.debian.org/logos/

By the way using a background image to define the layout isn't really a good idea, it makes the site less scalable.
And all the text on the background image is inaccessible.
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Old March 2nd, 2005, 09:08 PM
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Yeah, you might want to fix the oddly aligned text.

Take the Debian logo off the site. Changed color and changed position or not, it's stealing. That sucks :|

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ok, made alterations as per suggestion, sorry about the debian logo, it was an image i had running around my docunments for a while and thought it would look good. it did, but i couldnt figure out where i had seen it

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I didn't see the page beforehand, but right now it looks
pretty good to me.

+ Loads quickly.
+ Navigation is obvious.
+ Navigation is easy to read.
+ Layout is constant.

- The headings like 'Home Page' don't stand out very well.
- Content appears to be in all bold and is a bit hard to
read. Don't know if that's a browser thing, or what. Or
maybe just a me thing... I would suggest that you increase
the line height of the paragraphs or the font size.


+ / - Your links don't have titles. Not necessarily a bad thing,
but sometimes proves helpful.

my 2 cents. (or 3, who knows)
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Misalignment

When viewing the site in a 600p wide (half-screen) window, the text is oddly positioned - below the bottom border. It looks good in full screen mode.

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It looks much better now. The background and text fit together well.

Much better

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