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Old May 23rd, 2005, 04:55 PM
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kieransworld.co.uk (cheap computers)

r8 me site
not tottaly finished....
cheap computer
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Old May 24th, 2005, 10:35 AM
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Clean. Good looking.

I would suggest to center it.

When you click "computers" on the side, and click one of the options, things are ok. But when you click on "Value PC's" or "Home PC's" on the side, things kinda go haywire.

Oh, and you should probably use a better title for your page than "image.jpg".
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Old May 24th, 2005, 02:33 PM
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look at title now
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That's kind of cool. Some people might hate it. I don't mind it though.
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I think the site looks a little flat on the color site. Nothing much, just something to highlight. Black and grey is just too drab.
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Also, the scrolling ===> in the title bar looks a little cheesy if your aiming for a professional look, which I assume you are.
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what else i need to do
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I think that's about all the suggestion your going to get right now. Implement some of the changes and let's see how it looks. We can give you more feedback from there.
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