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Old September 2nd, 2004, 03:27 AM
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Mostly coded in CSS, with the help of tables where needed. Made accessible through DIA. Any comments, suggestions, and improvements are gladly accepted!

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Old September 2nd, 2004, 04:04 AM
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the layout isn't that bad, nice and clean.
though i don't like the hover effect when hovering the newsections.

also get rid of this line "Designed for resolutions of 1024x768 pixels or more." just makes you page look unproffessional.

codewise i would recomend a strict dtd,
you are using some deprecated elements (like font), and you are using tables needlessly much, like you don't need 3 table just to make the story headings,

and since you are aware of accessibility, you ought to know that you should concentrate on the semantics,
use the right html-element for the right job.
like use a hn-tag for headings, a td with a class=newstorytitle doesn't enchant the meaning of the content.

also you should always use paragraphs to enclose text,

and for the 'news' summary list, use a unordered list, try to avoid using the br-tag.

instead of <a name="244"></a><div> use id,
<div id="id244">
note that you cannot have a digit in the begining of a name or id.
http://www.w3.org/TR/html401/types.html#type-name

more about the semantic, it would make your page more accessible if you use more proper markup.

http://www.w3.org/TR/html401/types.html#type-name
http://www.webaim.org/techniques/structure/



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Old September 2nd, 2004, 06:08 AM
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It loooks very good overall, a nice clean layout thats easy to read etc. The one problem, is that viewing it with firefox, the bottom half of all the stories, and the footer isn't shown.

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Akh: Thanks for the input. I've already made some changes. I especially saw my grosse use of tables as disgusting (what was I thinking?). Oh well. I still have some work to do, but it's coming along nicely. (Ha en god dag!)

KI4BBO: I have discovered the same problem before, but I haven't figured out whats causing it. I was thinking that some "height" value in CSS was causing it, but I can't find it. #encapsulate coveres the whole document. Although if you adjust the size of your browser slighly, it shows. Of course that is not a pleasurable fix, but it's all I can do now.

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Akh: Thanks for the input. I've already made some changes. I especially saw my grosse use of tables as disgusting (what was I thinking?). Oh well. I still have some work to do, but it's coming along nicely. (Ha en god dag!)
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yeah, looks better now
overtime i would recommend that you change to a strict doctype,
but all in all a good looking page.
can never have enough linux sites


(takker, du får ha en god dag videre du også)

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I don't really see anything wrong with the design. At first glance, it doesn't look like a linux related site at all. That is a possible shortcoming of the design.

You say you use tables when necessary. I think you could easily get rid of more. The calendar should be tables IMO, but you use tables for the content. Why? Not trying to preach table-less design, but if you are taking the plunge, you need to go all the way.

Good luck with the site.

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