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Old October 3rd, 2004, 02:31 PM
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hi, what do you think of my design?

any suggestions or comments would be apreciated

the peoples faces are 3 of the main DJs that this type of music is based around,although im contemplating removing them
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Old October 3rd, 2004, 10:40 PM
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needs more cowbell

seriously though, it looks pretty good. i'd make it a little wider though, you're not gonna fit much content in that small area there. color scheme is good. text is a little blurry, but i think thats just cuz you have it aa'd too smooth.

i'd add in some filler content too. maybe some lorum-ipsum so we know what font you're gonna use for the rest of the site

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Old October 4th, 2004, 02:29 PM
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Looks like a nice design

I would leave the DJ's faces in, they seem to fit.

But I would agree - we need a larger quality picture to look at to make sure everything looks ok at the actual size.

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Old October 4th, 2004, 02:33 PM
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well that was just a design, ill make it full size later
but thanks for the feedback

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Old October 6th, 2004, 07:24 AM
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what do you think of the new design? ive changed it slightly
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Old October 6th, 2004, 10:11 AM
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Hey Tony,
Looks good! Just fill in the content and it should be A ok...
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Old October 6th, 2004, 11:04 AM
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new design ok theres what it will look like when made, any siggestions on how to improve it?
if your using mozilla above the log in screen there will be some type of image like nin the graphic design of it but mozilla doesnt show the box like IE does

its a bit different to the other designs but feedback would be appreciated,
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Old October 16th, 2004, 10:09 PM
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I would think that maybe you should use a better font like Tahoma and Verdana. And the white patch on the left looks a bit out of place.

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Old October 17th, 2004, 10:22 AM
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ok ive changed the design new design
any suggestions?
a couple of the links work like contact, styles and history but thats it

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Old October 17th, 2004, 12:25 PM
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It's a nice design but it looks like it needs something else more then just a log in box down the right hand side of the page. Maybe have a poll or a shout out box or something like that.

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Old October 17th, 2004, 12:48 PM
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i was gonna sell 1 or 2 button ads there, im still contemplating doing that though, not a bad idea though

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Old October 17th, 2004, 01:17 PM
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Hi again,

I was just looking at your site again and i noticed that the Updates section on the left looked very out of place. Try making it blend in to the site more instead of having a square of white sticking in the middle of nowhere. Its hard to explain but if you look at your site you'll see what I mean. Other than that, great site, keep up the good work.

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Old October 17th, 2004, 01:27 PM
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yea i kinda know you mean, i was thinking of putting the background as the same as that column, but it didnt stand out that much, ill think of something for that, thanks for the feedback

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Old October 18th, 2004, 01:22 AM
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Hi again,

I was just looking at your site again and i noticed that the Updates section on the left looked very out of place. Try making it blend in to the site more instead of having a square of white sticking in the middle of nowhere. Its hard to explain but if you look at your site you'll see what I mean. Other than that, great site, keep up the good work.

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Yup noobishtendency, that's what I mentioned earlier on. Tony, do work on it

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Old October 18th, 2004, 11:43 AM
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changing that to fit in is harder than it looks

ive tried about 5 designs all of which look just as bad

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