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Old April 12th, 2009, 02:03 PM
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My 1st Entry for the J.U.I.C.E. Freshly Squeezed Web Design Challenge

So not sure if some of you have heard of Cut & Paste or not, but they do some cool contest and design tournaments. I was hoping to sign up to try and be a competitor in their 2009 Digital Tournament, but I guess I missed the sign-in deadline.

But I have submitted my first design for their JUICE website redesign contest sponsored by SCION. You can get some more info on the contest here: Freshly Squeezed Web Design Challenge Winner gets 5K, there's a lot of entries so far and some good ones, so I doubt I'll take the greens, but hey, I haven't done some fun designs for a while so I'm giving it a shot.

This is my first entry, I called it "Green J.U.I.C.E." accordingly:

It's a bit artsy but it gave me a little depth into the site and will help with the other designs. View my entry to see how I explain how some areas would work when launched. My next 2 are going to be more structured and more relative to their concept and idea. But I'm not gonna submit those till the end of April.

Some of you should check it out and enter. It's all just for fun!
Any critiques welcome.

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Its beautiful. Truly artistic, even if the colours are a little lurid for my hangover this morning.

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I honestly can not think of a single critique about it. It just looks amazing! Actually I did just find one thing. On the footer, you have all the links, but each one is a seperate length away from each other. I don't know if it would look better with a set amount of space between them (Yes I know its because of the footer text beneath it), but it is worth a shot if it can help you win 5k.
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Only found 1 problem. At the bottom you spelled "graffiti" wrong.
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Nice attention to detail MaskedFox.

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