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Old November 17th, 2003, 06:11 AM
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my site template
www.freedom2game.tk

that is the template of my site, before i go furthur i just wanna know how much it sucks
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Old November 17th, 2003, 01:29 PM
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Hm...
not bad. Needs improvements though..

1. The blue font color is a little hard to read on the black bkgnd.
2. Standardize all fonts. The contact page has different font than the main page.
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Old November 18th, 2003, 07:56 AM
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ok, i just updated it, and i changed a bit, if you want to see how the writing looks, go to the server section
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Old November 18th, 2003, 08:50 AM
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Maybe you should also center it...?
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Old November 18th, 2003, 09:18 AM
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hi

it's a little plain for my taste and is the part where bandwidth is mentioned blurred on purpose - it hurts my eyes!

text is fine in server section but on the header on the hompage the text could do with a little sharpening up

all the best

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Old November 18th, 2003, 09:47 AM
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ok
ill centre it and the sign on the front page is meant to catch your eye, saying under construction, its still a template the site hasnt really gotten underway yet, but thanx!

edit: ok its centred now!
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Old November 18th, 2003, 09:51 AM
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i was talking about freedom - 2 - game!!

in particular the a and m in game - all very minor, it was just something that i noticed
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Old November 18th, 2003, 09:52 AM
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what do you mean by a and m?

and it is centred, hehe, its an illusion trust
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Old November 18th, 2003, 09:55 AM
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they are a little blocky compared to the other letters - even if you compare the m in freedom and game - the m in game is lower quality

as i say all very minor!!
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Old November 18th, 2003, 10:39 AM
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ok, ill try and fix it, what other prtoblems do you have with it?

i tried to make it as plain as possible, for something thats just going to be there and people aren't going to visit that much (no forums and stuff) so i decided to keep it plain with as little links as possible
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Old November 18th, 2003, 10:42 AM
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Looks neat now.
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Old November 18th, 2003, 10:45 AM
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yay
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