Website Critiques
 
Forums: » Register « |  User CP |  Games |  Calendar |  Members |  FAQs |  Sitemap |  Support | 
User Name:
Password:
Remember me
Go Back   Dev Shed ForumsWeb DesignWebsite Critiques

Reply
Add This Thread To:
  Del.icio.us   Digg   Google   Spurl   Blink   Furl   Simpy   Y! MyWeb 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread Display Modes
 
Unread Dev Shed Forums Sponsor:
  #1  
Old February 27th, 2005, 01:48 PM
varindersingh varindersingh is offline
Contributing User
Dev Shed Newbie (0 - 499 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: London, England , UK
Posts: 35 varindersingh User rank is Just a Lowly Private (1 - 20 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 10 h 54 m 55 sec
Reputation Power: 4
Send a message via MSN to varindersingh
Arrow My website

About my website:

My website is aimed at teenagers of the asian community (seeing that i am). It specialises in music from the east, genre's such as bhangra which here in the UK has become increasingly popular.
Keeping in mind that music isnt everyones cup of soup I have tried to make it interesting by adding other things of interest such as downloads, forums, downloads and other humorous things.
The website is made to respresent my point of view on things so therefore it is kind of restricted in some abnormal way. I like to remain the head figure on the website. The website title is on my name (Varinder Bola). Origionally when I decided to make a website I couldnt think of a good enough name. I havnt been too good at promoting the website but I along with the website have been recognised widely by websites of the same criteria

(entertainment/music/gossip)


Try not to hurt my feelings much when you do this. Please review my website and give a rating from 1-5 of what you think. Negative or Postive feedback is welcome.

best viewed in IE

(ps, i know i havnt got meta tags! havnt had the time).


- Varinder

Last edited by varindersingh : February 27th, 2005 at 02:56 PM. Reason: forgot to read rules and trying to edit post title

Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old February 27th, 2005, 02:57 PM
voltaire's Avatar
voltaire voltaire is offline
Ninja philosophism
Dev Shed Newbie (0 - 499 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: London, England
Posts: 435 voltaire User rank is Sergeant (500 - 2000 Reputation Level)voltaire User rank is Sergeant (500 - 2000 Reputation Level)voltaire User rank is Sergeant (500 - 2000 Reputation Level)voltaire User rank is Sergeant (500 - 2000 Reputation Level)voltaire User rank is Sergeant (500 - 2000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 1 Week 3 h 3 m 17 sec
Reputation Power: 21
it's pretty good.

one comment is that in Firefox (i know you said it works best in IE, but hey) the stuff at the bottom of the hopepage overlaps - that is, the links to download the song of the month is right over the feedback button, but that just needs a small formatting tweak.
Otherwise it's top.

My only other 'problem' is that i didnt understand the jokes, but that's down to my ignorance more than your jokes!

nice one

Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old February 28th, 2005, 09:35 AM
MaxM's Avatar
MaxM MaxM is offline
au courant
Dev Shed Newbie (0 - 499 posts)
 
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Florida
Posts: 334 MaxM User rank is Just a Lowly Private (1 - 20 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 19 h 45 m 56 sec
Reputation Power: 0
Where you have .:WELCOME:. and other content items it's difficult to read the actual text because it's white on a white fade. Either dim the fade or outline the text more be it with a stroke or drop shadow.

On your american translator page, you've got a crappily cut out picture that should been cleaned further in your logo.

Your comments page is also more clutter than anything and should be moved to it's own section or another location.

At the top left you have the search box. You've made it inconvient to begin typing by restricting the selection to just the word. A simple fix would be just to add a bunch of spaces or tabs after the word "Search."

G'luck.

Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old February 28th, 2005, 10:22 AM
varindersingh varindersingh is offline
Contributing User
Dev Shed Newbie (0 - 499 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: London, England , UK
Posts: 35 varindersingh User rank is Just a Lowly Private (1 - 20 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 10 h 54 m 55 sec
Reputation Power: 4
Send a message via MSN to varindersingh
Thumbs up

Hi thanks guys,

Feedback form, yes I didnt notice that until I viewed it in firefox. The logo that you reffered to has the white bits around it otherwise you wouldnt be able to realise where the guy's beard is ! (plus im not exactly a good graphics producer).

Searchbox is not in use, im still searching around for a decent php search script where I can add page information one by one in a database and the script searches from there.

Thanks for the comments anyway guys.

Reply With Quote
Reply

Viewing: Dev Shed ForumsWeb DesignWebsite Critiques > My website


Thread Tools  Search this Thread 
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes  Rate This Thread 
Rate This Thread:


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
View Your Warnings | New Posts | Latest News | Latest Threads | Shoutbox
Forum Jump


Forums: » Register « |  User CP |  Games |  Calendar |  Members |  FAQs |  Sitemap |  Support | 
  
 





© 2003-2008 by Developer Shed. All rights reserved. DS Cluster 6 hosted by Hostway
Stay green...Green IT