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Old February 29th, 2004, 11:49 AM
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New Mortgage Site...

Thanks for viewing. I, along with a few others, am rather new to the website world. If someone could look over the "look and feel" of this comp and let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.

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This is a nonfuntional site. We're still going over the look. This site will mostly have forms and whatnot that doesn't take up too much space.

Again, any comment will me welcomed.

Thanks again.
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Sorry. I messed up a little. Here's the JPEG.

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>> Sorry. I messed up a little. Here's the JPEG.
its alright, at least we had some fun with it ...

Seriously though, first i will have to ask
. what photo editing program you are doing this on? (so we know your constraints)

. What kind of fonts do you have on your system?
can you provide a shortlisted list? cos the Swash casp are not working dude. You want a stronger more serious look.

My 2 cents are:
Your bevels are out of control! too many and too big! have to practice restraint here. even though I'm guessing you want a patriotic look, with the USA flag colors and attempt to make the visuals flow like an actual flag?

That just doens't really work here, especially the curves - too heavy.
I would not encourage too much experimentation with a site like this. I think it needs to be practicle / straightforward - succinct

I am probably missing some points, anybody else?

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