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Old May 5th, 2004, 03:22 AM
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Nova Celestia - space art

After a lot of struggling, i've finally managed to put together a flash site:

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i like the theme , i like the description of yourself and the planets are great
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Awesome !

The critique is WOW !!!

I like it very much !

nice job...

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Ok, thanks guys

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Running mozilla on mepis linux, some parts of your flash didn't work.

When I clicked on the gallary link, it did a slow (too slow) transition to a gallaxy with the red dots. When I mouseover the dots, I get the thumbnail. However, when I click on the dot, nothing happens.

There's a white circle around one of the red dots. This, I would think, should mean this is your currently viewed item. But when mousing over the other buttons, it doesn't move.

While in the gallery, I can click on the gallery link again, getting the same transition animation but went back to the place I was just at. You should disable the link to the location you're currently at.

The portfolio links worked for me. Each planet opened in a new window. I assume that's how the gallary link is suppose to work.

After a little more playing around in the gallery, I now see that I needed to click on the thumbnail to get the full size image. You should add this option to clicking on the circle as well. For one reason, it's easy to accidently mouseover a different button on the way to clicking on the thumbnail. If you later want to expand this section, it could make it a regular maze to not mouseover the wrong button just to see the full size image. (by the way, interesting use of the "render cloud" filter to make the galaxies)
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