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January 15th, 2004, 01:58 PM
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Prease review BannersWorld.com
Hi,
We are jsut launched BannersWorld . Please provide any comments to improve out site. Thanks John.K
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January 15th, 2004, 08:04 PM
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Never overlook the importance of correct grammar.
For example the customer testimonial on the front page:- There should be a fullstop after Paul Jackson. i should be I when referring to yourself. where should be spelt were. Found should have no capital, this should. belive should be believe. I think your navigation needs to be looked at. It moves from the side to the top. You can only get to the FAQ questions page from the front page. Also portfolio.html is listed under 'Portfolio' and 'More Samples', which looks like a lazy mistake. Hope that was helpful. It doesn't look as though you need any advice on design...
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January 16th, 2004, 02:47 AM
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Design is quite nice, though as RonFearonsHair already stated, grammar and spelling is very important. Loads of typos. Otherwise quite good..
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January 16th, 2004, 10:05 AM
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Sorry, I haven't quite get "Also portfolio.html is listed under 'Portfolio' and 'More Samples', which looks like a lazy mistake"
Can you expalin bit more?. Sorry to ask.
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#5
January 17th, 2004, 03:40 AM
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Too stuffed with images!
Some of the table images (Prices) can easily be translated to html and by doing so, youŽll get a cleaner look. Portfolio lacks explanation. Maybe case explanations.
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January 18th, 2004, 04:44 AM
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I mean on the front page you are able to click on a button called 'Portfolio' and a button called 'More Samples' and they both take you to the same page.
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