Website Critiques
 
Forums: » Register « |  User CP |  Games |  Calendar |  Members |  FAQs |  Sitemap |  Support | 
User Name:
Password:
Remember me
Go Back   Dev Shed ForumsWeb DesignWebsite Critiques

Reply
Add This Thread To:
  Del.icio.us   Digg   Google   Spurl   Blink   Furl   Simpy   Y! MyWeb 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread Display Modes
 
Unread Dev Shed Forums Sponsor:
  #1  
Old February 10th, 2004, 06:12 AM
jakenoble's Avatar
jakenoble jakenoble is offline
System.out.println("eh?");
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Derbyshire
Posts: 859 jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 5 Days 17 h 57 m 46 sec
Reputation Power: 25
Send a message via MSN to jakenoble
Thumbs up Review my site please

Hi All

I didn't want to put my site to the dogs. I was afraid people would say it needed a complete overhaul. But then i thought well what the hell, i am updating it RIGHT NOW so i may as well know what is wrong with it RIGHT NOW so i can sort it as i go along.

Its my first CSS site, don't take any notice of the portfolio sites, did those ages ago when i had no idea what CSS was. Planning on re doing them anyway, so any hints with CSS then that would be great ready for when i re-do those portfolio sites with CSS.

Regards

Jake

Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old February 10th, 2004, 07:31 AM
jabba_29's Avatar
jabba_29 jabba_29 is offline
Back in HEL
Dev Shed God 8th Plane (8500 - 8999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Finland
Posts: 8,670 jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)  Folding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner FolderFolding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner FolderFolding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner Folder
Time spent in forums: 3 Months 3 Weeks 4 Days 6 h 10 m 50 sec
Reputation Power: 1618
Send a message via ICQ to jabba_29 Send a message via AIM to jabba_29 Send a message via MSN to jabba_29 Send a message via Yahoo to jabba_29 Send a message via Google Talk to jabba_29 Send a message via Skype to jabba_29
Facebook
Quite nice layout, though the text may be a bit small.

On one of your sub-pages,http://jakenoblewebs.co.uk/Pages/Design%20Pages/ I would lose the space between Design and services.

HTML and CSS are invalid, I would tidy that up
Fatal Error: No DOCTYPE specified!

Line: 0 Context : .nav_middle

Invalid number : widthonly 0 can be a length. You must put an unit after your number : 480

Otherwise, not bad
__________________
Cheers,

Jamie


# skiFFie | Home of the 'accessibility module' for Drupal
# Jamie Burns [me] Accessibility Module [drupal]
# guidelines | search | wap resources | not getting help | fold to cure

# Any form of employment is strictly prohibited ......


__________________

Let the might of your compassion arise to bring a quick end
to the flowing stream of the blood and tears .....
Please hear my anguished words of truth.

__________________

Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old February 10th, 2004, 07:49 AM
jakenoble's Avatar
jakenoble jakenoble is offline
System.out.println("eh?");
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Derbyshire
Posts: 859 jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 5 Days 17 h 57 m 46 sec
Reputation Power: 25
Send a message via MSN to jakenoble
Question

Thanks Jabba.

Didn't know that about width, i though zero on its own would be read as PX anyway, i'll change that.

I'll take a look at that spacing thing.

Now, the source doc i am very interested in, because i have no idea what it is? Any where i can get info on it, and what its for?

Thanks again

Jake

Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old February 10th, 2004, 08:06 AM
jabba_29's Avatar
jabba_29 jabba_29 is offline
Back in HEL
Dev Shed God 8th Plane (8500 - 8999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Finland
Posts: 8,670 jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)jabba_29 User rank is General 10th Grade (Above 100000 Reputation Level)  Folding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner FolderFolding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner FolderFolding Points: 57777 Folding Title: Beginner Folder
Time spent in forums: 3 Months 3 Weeks 4 Days 6 h 10 m 50 sec
Reputation Power: 1618
Send a message via ICQ to jabba_29 Send a message via AIM to jabba_29 Send a message via MSN to jabba_29 Send a message via Yahoo to jabba_29 Send a message via Google Talk to jabba_29 Send a message via Skype to jabba_29
Facebook
Here is a list of DOC TYPES You can get more info at www.w3.org

Doc types tell the browser what type of document it is receiving, thus not confusing it and enabling it to down load faster.

Good luck.

Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old February 11th, 2004, 04:44 AM
jakenoble's Avatar
jakenoble jakenoble is offline
System.out.println("eh?");
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Derbyshire
Posts: 859 jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 5 Days 17 h 57 m 46 sec
Reputation Power: 25
Send a message via MSN to jakenoble
Does no one else have anything to say?

Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old February 11th, 2004, 06:07 AM
Dusk's Avatar
Dusk Dusk is offline
Twilight Thinking
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Oxford UK
Posts: 656 Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 1 Week 5 Days 23 h 2 m 27 sec
Reputation Power: 32
I may do, but I can't see a link to your site anywhere...?
__________________
Cheers,
Dusk

My portfolio

Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old February 11th, 2004, 06:08 AM
Dusk's Avatar
Dusk Dusk is offline
Twilight Thinking
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Oxford UK
Posts: 656 Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 1 Week 5 Days 23 h 2 m 27 sec
Reputation Power: 32
I may do, but I can't see a link to your site anywhere...?

Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old February 11th, 2004, 06:21 AM
jakenoble's Avatar
jakenoble jakenoble is offline
System.out.println("eh?");
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Derbyshire
Posts: 859 jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 5 Days 17 h 57 m 46 sec
Reputation Power: 25
Send a message via MSN to jakenoble
i should be in my profile if you click on my name. Oh well.

www.jakenoblewebs.co.uk

Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old February 11th, 2004, 06:53 AM
Dusk's Avatar
Dusk Dusk is offline
Twilight Thinking
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Oxford UK
Posts: 656 Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)Dusk User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 1 Week 5 Days 23 h 2 m 27 sec
Reputation Power: 32
Sorry, being dumb!

Nice clean site, I have to say, although when the content is much short that the viewport, I get this uneasy feeling that the text is going to fall off the page any minute Maybe some footer or bottom border will help enclose the content, and maybe a pale colour in the background of the content, to make it stand out/break up the white, and give the eye something to anchor on, as I found myself wanding over the page, a little lost...

Also, the link to add a comment on your guestbook should stand out in some, like your other links, and you could apply some css classes to your form elements to make them blend in with the rest of the design.

Good luck, fellow midlander-er (grew up in Notts)

Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old February 11th, 2004, 02:01 PM
640k 640k is offline
Contributing User
Dev Shed Newbie (0 - 499 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Posts: 30 640k User rank is Just a Lowly Private (1 - 20 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: < 1 sec
Reputation Power: 5
Its very clean and simple, but for some reason, the white and blue is hard on my eyes. I don't know if its because I'm so used to sites like mine or this one that use alot of grays and colors to contrast the white..

I do see a pattern with the other sites you've developed though. Don't be afraid to use a little contrast to help direct your guest's eyes towards the areas that are most important. Contrast also helps people seperate areas from one another.

.02

Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old February 11th, 2004, 06:22 PM
jakenoble's Avatar
jakenoble jakenoble is offline
System.out.println("eh?");
Dev Shed Novice (500 - 999 posts)
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Derbyshire
Posts: 859 jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level)jakenoble User rank is Sergeant Major (2000 - 5000 Reputation Level) 
Time spent in forums: 5 Days 17 h 57 m 46 sec
Reputation Power: 25
Send a message via MSN to jakenoble
Firstly THANK YOU ALL!!!!

Will get to work on this stuff soon. Then post again to see if i have actually made any improvement.

Secondly. Any comments on the design and layout, colours and fonts? I know about the contrast problem, and the text size, any more specific design flaws.

Thirdly. What does anyone think of the QUOTE and GUEST BOOK features. I think the guest book should wait till I have a better site, so people can actually post and say its good. Rather than "well its a pretty average site with poor code, and does not implement CSS very well"

Anyone think i should get rid of the intro?

Should i then have a "DEMO" section or something to show that I can do Flash? And perhaps include more flash, graphics and effects in that "DEMO" page.

Jake

Reply With Quote
Reply

Viewing: Dev Shed ForumsWeb DesignWebsite Critiques > Review my site please


Thread Tools  Search this Thread 
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes  Rate This Thread 
Rate This Thread:


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
View Your Warnings | New Posts | Latest News | Latest Threads | Shoutbox
Forum Jump