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November 24th, 2003, 11:28 AM
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Review my site www.davidtorrent.com
Hello, how are you?
I have just registered and this is my first message so, hello!
I have done my personal website www.davidtorrent.com about the works and exercices done at university about web developing and others. I would be very glad if you do a little review about it.
Just see the page and say what do you think about design, navigation, usability... The page has an english version.
thanks.
David
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November 25th, 2003, 03:07 PM
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Hi
Thank you Cibok for this review  I'll try it. If you have a site I can do a review to
David
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December 11th, 2003, 02:36 PM
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David,
Perfect. Just two things you may consider but are sheerly stylistic opinion, page is still perfect.
1. What the blue mountain in the top? very abrupt...try to gradient fade it in.
2. Business plan. Developing an e-commerce website. I would make these bullet points small headers <h4> Or if you keep it indent the text below so it all falls just to the right of it.
Last edited by enzo250gto : December 11th, 2003 at 02:48 PM.
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December 12th, 2003, 02:54 AM
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can't see your website. gave me connection timeout. don't know why. i'll try again later.
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Hope this helps.
Mike
Royal Selangor Pewter
"I have not failed. I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work."
- Thomas Alva Edison (1847-1931)
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December 12th, 2003, 07:33 AM
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Hi
thanks for visiting, or trying it 
Now it's running if you want you can enter.
David
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December 12th, 2003, 08:16 AM
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guess what? i'm connecting from home now, and i still can't view it. "Cannot find server or DNS error"
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December 12th, 2003, 11:09 AM
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I don't know what's happening...
Try this: http://cv.uoc.edu/~dtorrent/index.html The domain redirets to this page. Could be here the error but for me works. The page is so simple and you will se an english version.
David
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December 12th, 2003, 11:25 AM
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from my office (uses high speed line) to my house line (dial up) and to starbucks (wifi), finally get to see yr website.
i agree with enzo250gto, mountain looks kinda chopped off. try gradient and feather. else it looks fine. plain and simple.
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December 12th, 2003, 11:34 AM
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hi pda833 and enzo250gto!
I see you don't like the mountains
Thanks for your review, i'll take note and do some changes.
thanks.
David
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