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Old April 16th, 2004, 09:34 AM
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would you please be so kind as to give me a review of this site before it is launched. it has a few obvious glitches . all ideas are welcome ..thanks

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Old April 16th, 2004, 10:31 AM
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We have a "Website Critiques" forum specifically for this. Move it there. Be sure to read the sticky.
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Old April 21st, 2004, 05:46 AM
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OK, so there are no links.
It looks, well,.... lets just say Im not a fan of the bg color. and sorry, the graphics look like they are straight from M$ clipart.

Why do you have 2 horizontal images and 2 vertical images -> they look the same -> and your vertical lines aren't straight -> is that meant?
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Old April 21st, 2004, 06:51 AM
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Congrats in making a msie only site,
i recomend that you do a test of your site in mozilla and opera.


i aslo recomend that you do a read up about the html standard at w3.org, what you got here is pretty far from that.

and last don't use frontpage, if you had written the site your self you could avoided all that horrible code.
avoided all that proprietary code that renders this site totally useless for people with other browsers than msie.
i think you site is a very good example why to avoid frontpage,
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Old April 21st, 2004, 07:10 AM
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it might be worth buying a decent webdesign package or going to downloads.com and downloading something thatas a bit better than frontpage

or i think dreamweaver do a free 30 day trial dont they???...might be worth a look
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Lol, even a free download from download .com is better than frontpage, and about £100 cheaper. Also, If you want to learn HTML, or just need a reference website, http://www.lissaexplains.com is really good.
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webmonkey.com isnt bad for html tags it has a cheatsheet with most of the codes on
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Yeah, that cheat sheet could be useful, but I'd still recommend Lissa for learning and copying and pasting html scripts

for those who can't be bothered to find the 'cheet-sheet', its here: http://hotwired.lycos.com/webmonkey...tml_cheatsheet/
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after a quick look at that cheat sheet at webmonkey, i would say that is rather outdated, featuring lots of deprecated tags and attributes.

i would rather recommend w3schools
got tutorials, taglists etc for both html and xhtml
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