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Old June 7th, 2004, 03:44 PM
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What do you think of this?

This is a fairly small gaming site i designed.

www.gamez-planet.co.nr

On my pc it seems that the top heading graphic is not appearing. This might just be my pc though...

Anyway, what do you think of the layout; how could i improve it?
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Old June 7th, 2004, 04:12 PM
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yea its just your computer the header is there on mine

i think you should change your font make it so its easier to read

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Old June 7th, 2004, 04:34 PM
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thought so. Thanks for the suggestion.

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Old June 7th, 2004, 04:50 PM
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and also, im sure you know this but the links arnt working either

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Old June 7th, 2004, 05:02 PM
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nice site, i can see the banner, have you tried pressing Ctrl + F5 as that should completly refresh the page and download the banner for you. As has already been mentioned is there any chance you can make the text slightly bigger or different font or something to make it slightly clearer. It is ok but just could be improved a tiny little bit. other than that cool site, good luck with it!!

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Hmm.. not sure whether I like the star background - I think it would benefit with a lighter background and dark text

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Hmm.. not sure whether I like the star background - I think it would benefit with a lighter background and dark text


mmmmmmmmm i think that might be worth a try too

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nice work. IMO the hyperlinks in the text should be underlined or colored so as to differentiate them from normal text. Right now they are of the same style and hyperlinks can be missed easily.

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I see the graphics, but the font is a little hard to read.

Overall nice sight though.


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This is a fairly small gaming site i designed.

www.gamez-planet.co.nr

On my pc it seems that the top heading graphic is not appearing. This might just be my pc though...

Anyway, what do you think of the layout; how could i improve it?
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