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Old April 15th, 2004, 04:07 AM
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would need a review plz :)

Hey there!

I would have a raw concept of a page for review. The page is gonna be a doctorīs portal, where medical information will be posted by different doctors as well as people searching for docs can find out about docs in their neighbourhood....

the basis of the page is a template, since I did not have the time to do all the design from the scratch...

now I would be interested in comments about wether itīs pleasant to the eye or not. And if not, what to change. Basically talking about the color-schemes and rollovers and stuff.

About the loading time: I know itīs a bit long, but I canīt prevent that, when wanting the page to look as it looks (gfx-based).

thx in advance

here is the page url: http://www.pyro-hosting.com/~aerzte/

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Old April 15th, 2004, 03:53 PM
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Rollovers are good - page download time wasn't too bad I thought.
Looks really good. The only thing I can comment on is the doctor picture - I feel it may be better with a real picture instead of a cartoon.
It lloks very good though - I know I said that already I was using Firefox in WinXP, played with window sized too, and everything seems in order.

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Old April 15th, 2004, 03:58 PM
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I would agree with you jabba The site looks fantastique but I would agree it would do better off with a picture of a real doctor as well.

Otherwise - great

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Old April 15th, 2004, 05:09 PM
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thx for the input

about the real pic: I am a real doctor myself only in about half a year but I guess I can masquerade myself a little for the page

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I'm going to agree and disagree with the above posts.
I agree that the site looks great and you shouldn't change a thing.
I disagree about changing the doctor picture. Leave it as it is. I think it would actually ruin the design if you put a real doctor in there; the cartoon doctor simply fits with the design better. And he makes me feel much more comfortable

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Old April 19th, 2004, 05:07 PM
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lol what now? loose or keep the comic doc?

thx for the input

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the cartoon doctor ... makes me feel much more comfortable


I agree.

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ok thatīs 3:2 I think if I got all that right... keeping the comic doctor then basically I gonna start off the works now. If anyone is interested in what I will come out with I will later on post in this thread, when I am fully done (will for sure take several weeks till then since I plan to implement a complicated CMS for a possible unilimited no of users and so on, as well as am having rather much to do with my studies atm, but still sometime the page will be finished Then I will post

thx for all the input, best regards, albert

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